Developmental Feedback for Fiction – Story, Structure, Pacing

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This is not proofreading.

This is big-picture structural analysis.

I focus on:

• Plot cohesion
• Stakes & tension
• Scene effectiveness
• Character motivation
• Narrative clarity
• Emotional payoff

Ideal for:

• Indie authors
• Writers preparing to query
• Writers revising drafts 1–3

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2–5k – $115
5–10k – $195

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posted: 2026-03-03 11:41

updated: 2026-03-03 13:39

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